Monday, September 06, 2010

Journal Entry 9 - Week 7 Interim Submission

Attached are my week 7 interim presentation panels, and some photos of my study model:





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Model experimenting with solids and voids using lights


























Comments and feedback:


1. Contextual: the project needs to look more closely at the existing grid and has to show more integration with the context. At the moment the project can stand alone in any place. 

2. Spatial: develop the fine grain of the project inside the exhibition spaces displaying large objects.


3. Spatial/Formal: explore ideas and consider the spaces you develop on the lower part of each cube within the walls of the solid/concrete lower part of each cube. What kind of spaces do you develop for the people working there?

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